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Freelance Journalism Skill
A compact, end-to-end guide for freelance journalists: pitching, angle development, writing in AP style, and post-pitch protocol.
Instructions
1. Decide the request type
| User says... | This section |
|---|---|
| "query letter," "pitch to [publication]," "what to send editors" | Query & Pitch |
| "story angle," "how to frame this," "what's new here" | Angle |
| "write this up," "news article," "AP style," "edit this draft" | Writing |
| "editor hasn't replied," "got rejected," "no response" | After the pitch |
2. Query & Pitch
Freelance query letter template:
Subject: Pitch: [Compelling one-line headline]
Dear [Editor name or "Editor"],
[Opening hook — the single most intriguing detail or question from your story]
[What the story is, who it's about, what you'll show]
[Why now — news hook or timely angle]
[What you have — confirmed sources, access secured, documents obtained]
[Why this publication — how it fits their coverage/audience]
[Why you — relevant clips, expertise, access]
I estimate [word count] words and can deliver in [timeframe].
Thank you for your consideration.
[Your name]
[Brief bio — one line]
[2-3 clip links or portfolio URL]
[Phone] | [Email]Quick rules:
- Subject line: short, specific, no "Query:" prefix
- Body: 3-5 short paragraphs (200 words max)
- Pitch only ONE story per email
- Never send generic copy-paste queries
- Follow every publication's submission guidelines exactly
Pitch types at a glance:
| Type | Hook focus | Length |
|---|---|---|
| News pitch | Timeliness, who/when | 2-3 sentences |
| Feature pitch | Human angle, narrative | 1 paragraph + supporting |
| Investigation | Stakes, evidence you have | 1 page max |
| Op-ed pitch | Argument, why now, your credential | 3 short paragraphs |
3. Angle
The "so what" test — answer all four before pitching:
- Why this story? (significance)
- Why now? (timeliness/news hook)
- Why you? (access, expertise, angle)
- Why this outlet? (audience fit)
Topic vs. Angle:
| Topic (broad) | Angle (specific human story) |
|---|---|
| Homelessness | The family on the housing waitlist for 3 years |
| Climate change | The town already moving because of rising seas |
| Healthcare costs | The insulin price that tripled while the patent was extended |
| Education | The teacher who spent $10k of her own money on supplies |
Angle brainstorm questions:
- What's the conflict? Who's fighting whom?
- What's the surprise? What won't readers expect?
- What's the emotion? What will readers feel?
- What's the question? What don't we know?
Can you explain it in one dinner-table sentence? If not, sharpen it.
4. Writing (AP Style essentials)
Lede — inverted pyramid (35 words or fewer):
Who + what + when + where + why (if known) + how (if relevant)
Good: "A fire killed three people in Northeast Philadelphia early Tuesday." Bad: "The city council, which has been debating for months, voted Tuesday night..."
Numbers:
- Spell out one through nine ("three witnesses")
- Numerals for 10+ ("15 people")
- Numerals for ages, percentages, addresses, money always
- Never start a sentence with a numeral
Attribution:
- Use "said" — not "stated," "remarked," "noted"
- Attribution goes after the quote, not before
- Break at natural pauses
Dates & times:
- Months abbreviated: Sept., Oct., Nov., Dec. (not March, April, May, June, July)
- Times: 9 a.m., no commas; noon/midnight (not 12 p.m.)
- Days: capitalize ("Tuesday"), never abbreviate
Common swaps:
| Use | Not |
|---|---|
| more than | over (quantities) |
| fewer | less (countable) |
| less | fewer (mass nouns) |
| that | which (restrictive clauses) |
| which | that (non-restrictive clauses) |
Headlines:
- Sentence case, not title case
- No periods at end
- Present tense for past events, infinitive for future
Paragraphs:
- 1-3 sentences each
- One idea per paragraph
- Break long quotes across paragraphs
5. After the pitch
If accepted:
- Confirm deadline, word count, edit process
- Confirm kill fee (for freelance)
- Get editor's preferred contact method
- Ask about style guide, multimedia needs
If rejected:
- Ask for brief feedback (politely)
- Ask if a different angle would work
- Keep the relationship warm for next time
If silence:
- Follow up once after 1-2 weeks
- If still nothing, pitch elsewhere (unless exclusive)
- Don't take it personally — editors are overwhelmed
Example
User says: "Help me write a query letter about a local mayor who's been taking donations from developers while voting on zoning changes."
Skill does:
Subject: Pitch: Mayor's developer donations and zoning votes
Dear Editor,
Last month, Mayor Lisa Chen voted to approve a downtown rezoning that will allow a 12-story condo tower — three days after she received $5,000 in campaign contributions from the developer's wife.
Over the past year, I've found that Chen has accepted $42,000 from developers whose projects she's voted on, raising questions about whether the city's ethics rules are sufficient to prevent conflicts of interest. The state ethics commission is reviewing a complaint I helped file.
This fits [Publication]'s local government accountability coverage, especially your recent series on campaign finance. I've been following municipal politics for [Outlet] for two years and have Chen's voting record and contribution data in hand.
I estimate 1,800 words and can deliver in 10 days.
Thank you for your consideration.
[Your name]
Freelance reporter covering municipal politics
[clip link 1] | [clip link 2]
555-0123 | you@email.comWhen NOT to use this skill
- The user is writing fiction, not journalism
- Requests for data analysis or statistical reporting without narrative
- Academic papers or scholarly publishing
- Technical documentation or how-to guides (non-journalistic)
- Press releases (use PR copywriting instead)
- Social media posts (unless news-related and tied to a larger story)
- Poetry or creative nonfiction that isn't news-driven
- If the user explicitly just wants a grammar check with no structural advice